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Submitted: January 21, 2006
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i have mixed feelings for this.
hate the background on the left but i like the neck area. this looks better from further away i have to admit :hmm:
neway please tell me your honest opinion. i think i can make this better with your help. if you have any advice of what i could do or if you even see somthing that looks weird please tell me!! :heart:
ok, this is from the film 'Gohatto' (hense the name)
WIP- [link]
I have made meny improvments to the face since i read your feedback from the WIP. Thank you everyone! :heart:
Ref: [link] from [link]
hope you all like it, :heart:

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EDIT
okally, i made changes! the whole mouth has been improved

xxx :kiss: :kiss: xxxx
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This is really cool. However, the background doesn't really suit the character; maybe something moe traditional japanes/chinese? ie. one of those paper-walled houses or traditional temples?

Either way, it's really cool.

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yeah the neck area sure looks awesome, very real and anatomically correct :nod:
Nothing wrong with the bg really, it's just hard to tell what it is. But all in all everything looks good.

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coloring is very good and your right, the neck looks awesome. the only thing i see that looks off is the mouth. I just saw this movie yesterday and Kano's mouth isn't as wide. he has a tiny little mouth with very high peaking top lip. the position of the mouth also makes him look a bit tense, whereas the reference he looks very relaxed. the only other thing i see isn't really a flaw because it looks fine but his eyes are a bit more open in the reference.

anyhoo, im sucky at critiques but ilove this pic anyway despite the mouth being a bit off. the coloring is wonderful!!

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You did an awesome job with his neck and with his clothing. :D His eyes, as well. The background seems a bit off... but hey; it's better than what I could ever do. :D Awesome job, as always.

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yea, i agree with :devpictachio-god:, just fix the background up a lil' bit and you're good to go ^^

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Ok, don't laugh at me if I sound stupid, but is it also that movie called 'Taboo'? I've seen that guy somewhere before...but the name of the movie was Taboo...or does Gohatto mean taboo? :P
i think that you could do sth with background... but now it's look awesome! really i like it... very good job ^^ gratz! :glomp:
Your works're beautifull i think...love You!!! XD please drow sth for meXDDD

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veeeerrryyy gorgoues^^

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Yeah...the neck looks GREAT! XD The lighting and shading's awesome too.

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great picture maybe the background isnt intense enough. and wat colours did you use for skin?

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